Generally, this thesis needs major corrections. Here’s what is needed:
Chapter 1: Mainly needs proofreading and any necessary additions.
Chapters 2 and 3: Need proofreading, grammatical corrections and cohesion.
Chapter 4: Needs proofreading, modification on the regression model and its respective attributes, and a write-up on the relevant ethical considerations for the chapter
Chapter 5: This is the results chapter after running the regression model (Multivariate regression); Needs to be revised to present the results and respective clarifications of the results (3 pages)
Chapter 6: Needs to be revised to tie the results to the theoretical framework
Chapter 7: Needs to be revised to address the credibility of the research findings and the ethical considerations for the whole research (2 additional)
Abstract: Needs to provide an overview of the entire thesis (1 page)
Appendices: Need to be developed where necessary
Should be free of plagiarism!
Lastly, general formatting and neat layout for an easy read and navigation
