revision. This annotated bibliography is an absolute mess that I had to stop reading.
1. This is not in MLA. You are required to write an annotated bibliography in MLA. You are using some other format that is not MLA, including things like a cover sheet, which is not part of MLA.
2. Why did you include a 4-5 page essay at the beginning of the document? I only asked for four sources in your annotated bibliography, not an essay of any sort. Look at the assignment sheet and annotated bibliography example I posted on Moodle.
3. There are numerous grammatical and stylistic issues in the annotated bibliography. You need to proofread this work more thoroughly.
4. You do not include a Works Cited page for your annotated bibliography – your annotated bibliography IS your Works Cited page.
I strongly suggest that you consider this for your revision. I also suggest that you follow my directions to the research essay closely.