Do a full correction of the existing dissertation. I got 47/100 i need 50/100 at least. Follow correctly and precisely all the guidelines, feedbacks and everything that the tutor suggests in the “Assessment Feedbacks Sheet” that will be add to files. All the informations that needs to be changed can be modified, it needs to be a better version of the initial dissertation by following the tutor’s commentary!!! Use Harvard Referencing System Use only google scholar references for the Litterature review Use simple sentences and understandable english for a non-native english talker like me. Make it the clearest and coherent possible. The biggest part to modify is “Litterature review” but do correct and modify all the other parts too. Follow every details that are very well mentioned in the “Assessment feedback sheet” done by the tutor and corrector itself.
