Write a research paper on social media’s impact on the food industry.I just need you to edit the essay with the professor feedback.
This is the feedback: There a few moments that the paper feels little shallow (where you skim over certain ideas, but could expand and go deeper into it). I think that editing or revising to focus on marketing/business/consumer OR democratization/diversifying culture in food would help it feel a little more cohesive. See the attached file for my in-text feedback.
Also, I will attach a feedback document from the professor.
IMPORTNANT NOTE! Please Don’t use hard words that is not common for second language writers.