This is a sports assignment on why the transfer portal is negatively affecting college football and its athletes, but the main topic is what we should do about the problem.
It is a revision of what I have wrote about my point of view and how the problem should be solved.
I did not write about how it should be solved, so it needs to be mentionioned in the essay along with at least 3 sources (1 academic).
I have included my past two essays for revision and infromation for the new essay.
The new essay basically just needs to be a revised version of Part III and Part IV with additional information about how to solve the problem.