Please revise the essay to improve the organization and clarity of the introduction and paragraphs and add details.
(the instructions for the essay)
Write a 6 paragraph essay of approximately 1000 words in which you identify a claim regarding EITHER the causes for why people break out of boundaries OR the effects of being forced into boundaries. Be sure your thesis statement is a complete thought and a meaningful point. Support this claim through an analysis of causal relationships of the following work: Sandra Cisneros’ “Only Daughter,” Include relevant background information and some properly cited quotes from the text.