This is a revision of a literature review. The maximum pages for the literature review is 35. Sources have been included with the revised literature review. I have included feedback from my professor which will be included in the information below.
I’ve added my very picky comments to the chair’s draft (attached). I suggest that you take each one to heart. They are not meant to discourage you, but to refine your work. You should consider an overall structure to your writing rather than just putting data/sentences down. Think ancient temple: lay a foundation, erect 3-10 columns of research along with the components of your framework, tie these non-touching columns together with a triangle roof that touches every column AND points to the gap in literature YOUR research will attempt to fill.
Update your references. Stay focused on your topics, but updating your references is the most important item to address.
The Chapter 2 Checklist will require References within 5 years.
