The essay has been already written and I editted a little bit by myself. Please read the essay first and then compare it to the check list. It is a research argument paper, not just a genral research parper.
For the first page instructions, please see the suggestions from my partner. (Some of the changes might not be necessary but the thesis statement should be include with the solution)
For the pages about problems, delete the history part (I have deleted some of it already) and give more enplainations of the concequnces and effects of the problem on a society. Also see the suggestions pages.
For the solutions pages, please also see the suggestions from the professor, and compare to the checklist carefully. Conclution is good enough and no need for changes.
Proof read the gramma for me please.
