Do the title and first few sentences make readers want to read on? Explain. Is the sequence of events in the narrative clear, or does the story get sidetracked at any point? Explain. At what point, if any, do you get confused or feel something is hard to grasp? Is there enough detail, and is it interesting? Will readers be able to imagine the setting? Can they picture the characters and sense what they′re like? Would it help to add or improve the dialogue so that readers can hear the characters? Does the write narrate actions clearly and vividly? Is the significance or importance of the narrative clear to you? Overall, what do you think your teammate needs to work on or look at again or ask the professor about for this project? Is there anything you see that you think might hurt your teammate′s final draft grade later on?
