Factual Information: Demonstrate a nuanced understanding of the history of design, providing all of the information for each of the designs as well as citing them.
Historical Context: Build up the historical/cultural context (e.g. more detail about the cultural environment in which the work was created will help to explain its appearance/significance). Work on the descriiptions of formal qualities to really explain how they convey meaning in each of the examples, using descriiptive language.
Subject Matter: Provide a stronger thesis for the work provided.
Thematic Elements: Show a connection from each of the designs provided.
Cultural Significance: Build up the historical/cultural context: all the designs have to connect through the topic/the socio-cultural context.
