Unfortunetly your work does not meet the
requirements of the assessment brief. The focus of
your essay is not what is required. Your work should
discuss what management and leadership are as
concepts, relevant theory that helps to explain about
how we understand about leadership and
management and skills required for the application of
relevant theory within an public health/ heathcare
context. Unfortunately your work does not discuss
many of these requirements in any detail. It is well
wriitten and presented but just doesnt provide the
required information about leadership and
management .
For your resubmission make sure you discuss what
management and leadership are , the similarities and
differences -are they considered the same or different
, are they reliant upon each other. Alos its important
to discuss relevant theories that try to explain
leadership and management and their application
within a public health or healthcare context. You can
focus on one health issue or intervention or activity or
can use a variety to support the points you
make. There needs to be more application and critical
analysis of theories of leadership/management
throughout the essay, including the skills required to
manage/lead in public health and healthcare.