Which sentences or paragraphs seem out of order, incompletely explained or otherwise in need of revision?
You are to review this business plan adding notes to the Word document that is attached and answer the following: 1. What part(s) of the paper are the most effective? 2. What part(s) of the paper are the least effective? 3. What is the big idea? 4. List the major points of support that demonstrate … Read more