Chapter 1:
-What is your treatment? You can’t just list support programs, you need ONE CLEAR TREATMENT.
Chapter 3:
-Your steps will need to be more thorough in Chapter 3. How many subjects will participate? How will you choose who will participate? How will you place students in the treatment and control group? What instrument will you use for the pre-measurement. Name the instrument. Give greater details about the treatment(what, where, when, duration and frequency). Include the post measurement.
-Include your exact treatment and outcome terms in your definitions.
-Your variables are the independent (treatment) and dependent (outcome) variable. You need ONE CLEAR TREATMENT and ONE CLEAR MEASURABLE OUTCOME.