There are some essential feedback and input regarding this research that needs to be fixed/changed, and they’re as follows:
1. The research paragraphs need to be fully formatted.
2. The conclusion and results have to be after the discussion, and you can add your own comments on the literature review without dividing it into findings and results.
3. The survey was distributed to 15 consumers, but only 10 returned completed questionnaires. It’s important to note that the number of participants in the survey is relatively small, which may limit the generalizability of the results.
4. The research recommendations need to be expanded, as I only found two recommendations.
These changes are very very essential and important.
