I would like you to rewrite completely the essay while keeping the same informations/direction. You can add some if you want or change some parts for it to be more interesting. This is an essay for a course named Cyberutopia and Technodystopia. The teacher is a a journalist and PHD from columbia so we are expected to have high leve of writing.
The world limit is 1500 +or- 10%
If needed you can remove or add thing to each part.
Could you also verify the format as it should be APA style. I added intro, 1st part, second part and conclusion so it is easier for your to have an overview of this essay.
