This is a rewrite for an Army War College Argumentative Essay. I received instructions that can be sent to you on how to fix, in order to receive a passing grade. I need stronger references, along with a better flow of the Chicago/Turabian style. This is precise Army writing, and the instructions need to be followed to the highest degree. I also need a guarantee of privacy/no plagerism, especially with it being for an Army school, please! I have also included the instructor notes for the rewrite, along with the paper itself, with comments in the side margins from the Army writing center instructor.
