This essay needs to be heavily edited and improved. The topic is “Critically consider how bordering and rebordering have shaped contemporary migration regimes.”
The essay produced is very uncritical and general throughout. There will be some comments in red in between the essay and those comments need to be addressed directly. Most importantly, this essay needs to be critical, there must be critical analysis, evaluations along with relevant examples and links to back up what’s discussed. Secondly, this issue at hand regarding Bordering an rebordering, which should be the main focus isn’t discussed adequately at all, bordering and reordering (internally and externally), everyday bordering, the key developments within that must be the focus of the analysis. how migrants strategize and navigate these borders and the challenges faced etc have to be the focus.
