Thesis statement I presented was: black birthing mothers are experiencing the brunt poor of maternal health outcomes due to systemic racism and oppression.
Some ideas Id like to have presented: (though the writer can change up some other than one to make the paper flow better)
Write a review paper on racism and oppression from the past and present.
-properly historicity
the history of discrimination against black women in medicine. (This idea is a must because the professor claims my ideas are hewing close to not historical, but as long as this point is hit properly, then he is okay with the paper)
-causes and impacts of racial disparities among black women, perceptions of pain in black women in regard to racial bias, whether or not theirs a relationship between ethnicity and the number of years it takes to receive a diagnosis, etc