Please help me edit and finish the introduction to my research paper. I am doing a study on the correlation of sleep deprivation and social anxiety to see if more sleep deprivation is correlated with more social anxiety. Basically the introduction should describe describe the two variables of interest (in this case sleep deprivation and social anxiety). It should also provide the rationale for why i think my study is significant, and clearly state my hypothesis. As of right now, I have already written more than half of the Intro, please help me edit what I’ve written and help me finish the intro. You will need to do some quick research on sleep deprivation and find 2 or 3 sources for it! Another 200-300 words should be enough to complete my introduction. I will also be attaching a sample introduction along with my incomplete introduction. Thanks!
