you will need to make the issue clear. is the shortage in rice causing prices to go up? make that connection think about developing a background section where you define the issue and trace the factors that contribute to the manifestation of the issue today (this could involve combing and building from the sections you already have that traces factors that contribute to this issue emerging to impact consumers). once you have established this section develop a section that address significance that addresses the rates and trends of the issue (e.g., the increase in rice prices over time and income of residents of the Philippines). next you can etch out a outcome section that addresses the outcome of people not being able to buy rice ( e.g., are people going hungry?) then solutions with your solutions you want to make clear how they are meant to help those citizens who cant afford rice. did the rice tariff help law help get rice to residents? be clear continue to work on what has been proposed, what has been implemented, outcomes when it comes to solutions ***other comments continue working to hone it to focus on the issue of the paper and build to the proposition have any popular sources addressed this issue? add their discussion to the intro proposition: “…negative impact Filipino consumers”
