Please rewrite to incorporate the following feedback:
Tools, Techniques, and Technologies
What specific Tools, Techniques, and Technologies are you using and how will you use them? What are you going to use to design your production plan? Did you consider a value stream map or service blueprint?
Lean Operation and Services
You need to more clearly state how you will utilize lean practices.
Sustainability
You did not discuss considerations made for sustainability to eliminate waste and how you will implement green practices into your business. Did you consider Reduce, Reuse & Recycle?
Involvement
You did not fully discuss the legal, cultural, global, and human involvement needed to implement your production plan. You needed to include all of these in the paper.