The last essay that you did about that topic my professor didn’t like it he said if your thesis is that some people are smarter and some are not. I need to see those three areas you with use for support on the first paragraph. Then, you kind of say that some people are born smarter but then again,some people can make themselves smarter. Try a different approach that sounds less like a research project and more like an argumentative essay. Should we only spend our resources on the smarter people? Why?Or do the less smarter need our attention?Why?If we are unequal, what about the American ideal that anybody can be a success?
