Introduction
Generally, well summary background including personal experience and your journey working in various settings to nutrition with consistent evidence and concise language. Good use of appropriate language was applied and some detail of integrated CPDs were highlighted such as working with clients and designing a follow up programme.
Communication
You have demonstrated some awareness about the importance of communication and provided bully points of the skills you poses and the experience you have had dealing with arrange of clients. You also provided images/evidence of clients you have worked with. However, you did not detail the types and methods of communication you are applied/applying whilst having worked with a range of settings/clients. Overall, this section needed further attention.
Professionalism
You did not provide any information about the professional affiliations such as AfN, SENr and ISSN and how these will benefit your chosen filed of practice. This section is missing in your submitted work therefore you have been marked zero for this.
Personal development plan
You provided some details about the PDP, but this lacked depth and focus overall. Your business, nutritional science and sports-related CPD are missing. Overall, this section needs further attention and time.
