Hi there,
first of all, thanks a lot for your support and cooperation.
you have completed my course work, but unfortunately I failed and the instructor sent the feedback to me in order to resubmit my course work again and follow the criteria for this submission as well.
could you please go over on the attached files and review it again to be aligned with his feedback and do the changes on the word file that you sent it to me ?
please keep in mind, the words count should not exceed 4250 for part 1 and part 2.
the deadline will be June 12, 2022.
below is the feedback from the instructor :
Ghazi, you have provided several interesting answers. However, you need to complete several criteria in more detail. This means you have been awarded a Refer.
Strengths of submission:
Layout and structure: A professional style has been followed in the questions you have completed. This is clear and easy to follow with the relevant information highlighted.
Clear and concise: You have utilized the word count effectively ensuring your responses contain the relevant information for the criteria.
Presentation: Effective and appropriate use of different presentation styles appropriate to the assessment which enhanced your information. Your actual presentation is professionally constructed
Content: You have contextualized your report and provided relevant and meaningful information throughout.
Developmental:
You need to complete 1.1, 1.2, 1.4, 2.3 and 3.4 with more clarity and analysis. Please follow the advice provided above. I also recommend watching the assignment instruction video on the Avado VLE.
the corrections must be in a different color so marker can see what was added.
Please complete all of the presentation element of the assessment. Thank you.
