I need assistance with writing my admissions essay. I have answered the basic questions but need to make it more thorough. The questions and my responses are below.
1. What are the specific academic and professional qualities you possess that could help you excel within this program?
With my experience, I have built outstanding relationships with keen skills, a high level of initiative, and attention to detail. I am also excellent at understanding needs or requirements through oral or written communications.
2. What goals do you hope to achieve if you are accepted into this program?
If accepted into this program, I hope to build new relationships and begin to work towards a new career. I also believe this program will give me the resources to grow personally and professionally.
There are other things I am going to add to make it 3 pages but I just need help elaborating on these parts specfically.