I attached my draft, you should edit it based on the instructions below, so you are assigned to write a rough draft of my script/ podcast that ill be saying out loud. Please use the outline I attached to use it. I used “Redemption Song” by Bob Marley protests against discrimination.Please use the instructor’s comments below to edit the outline and write the podcast script.Comments:”Which musical clips from the song will you include to demonstrate your points? Find specific places to share the actual music. You can also discuss the importance of reggae as a political musical form. What does the rhythmic pattern do to the listener? How about the instruments? Do these things matter in terms of your thesis? Show us how the music asks listeners to push back against oppression by talking about the music that is behind the lyrics.”Instructions.Flesh out your already-written outline with details that support your thesis statement. It takes approximately 2 minutes to read 1 page of double spaced text out loud. Keep that rough guideline in mind while you’re writing (provide a link to the song or a video so you don’t need to use too much time playing excerpts).You likely won’t be able to use all of your analysis, so carefully select those points that most clearly support your thesis statement.Your script should, for the most part, cover the podcast or video from beginning to end. It should also indicate your musical clips; write where the clip should start and end in the script. The words on the page do not need to be exactly how they will be spoken in your final version – I will say again that this is a work in progress, and you’re doing this to get ideas to help you in your process.Peer review one of your colleague’s rough scripts. 10 pointsCritically read one your colleague’s scripts in class on April 1. You will be assigned partners for this assignment.Provide feedback on the argument, structure, analysis, and/or interpretation.Make sure you address each of these areas:DepthAccuracyLogicClarity with mechanics of writingPrecision of musical terminologyCreativityWhat did you think worked? Why? What do you think could use improvement? Why? Remember that the best feedback is honest, respectful, and specific. Your goal as a peer reviewer is to improve your peer’s project as much as you can, and conversations should be in-depth and productive.Respond to your colleague’s rough draft in the discussion board during class on 4/1; you can take notes about your conversation and upload them by the end of class ( USE MY DRAFT AS THE PEER REVIEW)
