revise the essay based on the instrustion, this is my outline for topic 5:Thesis statement: Requiring that vaccinations prove to be positive overall, as it leads people to get vaccinated aggressively; preventing the mass spread of the virus and lifting restrictions to get the economy back to normal.Outline:1. Requiring proof of vaccination can lead people to be actively vaccinated.2 Requires that vaccination proves to prevent the large-scale spread of the virus.a. Counter-argument:It is still possible to get the new crown after being vaccinated, but the new crown vaccine can significantly reduce the fatality rate and relieve symptoms, and more people can recover on their own without taking up medical resources.b. this policy can prevent the collapse of the medical system.c, reduce the number of deaths3. Is a vaccination certificate required to prove people’s resistance so that travel is no longer restricted.a. This policy allows people to circulate, the economy returns to normal, and families can meet.
