Write a research paper outlining how to reflect on the American educational system from Freire’s point of view.
I already submitted the first draft and now I am required to finish the draft, I will attach my previous draft and chosen option to write about : Reflecting on Freire’s Perspective of American Education.
My professor repliedto my previous draft essay 1: Overall Feedback
Hi Modawi,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I like how you describe that your reason for coming to SUNY Adirondack is to build a “stronger foundation in academics.” And I appreciate your realization that learning to become a better write will take a good amount of practice.
I would suggest that you should try and write clearly and simply. Remember that writing clearly means getting to the point quickly. Additionally, it’s better to express your points in simple and clear language. See my suggestions.
Please recorrect my mistakes for the final draft that is due today (final draft), Mar 7, 2024, 03:40 AM. Make sure its not AI Detected.
My fisrt essat draft is attached, (do not change the title or concept).
Also the requirments and instructions are attached, (follow thw required method).