Write a paper describing what simple technology means.The file to be edited is called Individual essay The paper needs to be rewritten with the same argument and the same sections. This essay fails due to: –fails make a clear and coherent argument. –grossly exceeds the word count –several claims not supported with references to the literature nor backed up by your own empirical experiences. –poor language ) Notes: –It’s difficult to pinpoint the argument. The way it is stated in the introduction is less of an argument and more of “…analyses the function of view in prototyping.”. Remember, you should form an argument (see “Purpose” in the Essay Writing Guide, p.7) –I don’t understand the concept of ‘excessive-fidelity’. Are you perhaps suggesting contextually too high fidelity(?) –the terms ‘user’, ‘consumer’ and ‘costumer’ seems to be used without any clear distinction of meaning throughout the text. –this sentence doesn’t make any sense to me “Users can also fixate on the perceived excessive best of the prototype, focusing extra on floor-degree information instead of offering valuable insights.” –in the Conclusion there are more seemingly nonsensical sentences I just don’t understand. Such as: “…guarantees the technology of treasured insights.” And “…enhances the consumer revel” –overall, the text seems underworked with loose ends and poor language.)
