Im focsing on the greek dacne from Lado Startou comapny:
the dance:
For the thesis follow the five guidleine
dont froget to add the motive (pesuade the reader) at the end before conclusin
Feedback recevied from draft:
– Focusing only on masculinity
– Add (Butler) to the definition paragraph
– Define gender as a social construction
– Describe (Conell) normative approach only / norm= masculine toughness + independence
– add additional characteristics from Hana- if so justify
– prepare for naysayer using Connell’s weakness of ” normative approach to defining masculinity
