You are to go through this essay and fix the errors of the previous writer. The citations are not complete. I have highlighted every sentence that needs to be cited, including one blue paragraph that needs complete rewriting.
Please cite each SENTENCE that is highlighted. Either use the sources already provided, or add new ones. But each indiviual highlighted sentence. Please do not cite 3 sentences as one because they are all highlighted consequtively ; they need to be individually cited.
I have attached the paper , as well as the original instructions + sources document so you know what it is about and how the flow is meant to be.
I put 8 sources required as a MINIMUM. Please , as i said, add new sources to cite the sentences.
This is an academic research paper, and the way it is written does not sound at a University level. Please do what is needed to elevate it. I would suggest editing the generational trauma , legal realm , and poverty paragraphs. There is repetition ; eliminate that. Please just elevate the paper.
