Please see attached 3 documents.
– The brief for the assignment
-The original paper submitted with the tutor comments as to why it failed
-New paper that I have wrote based on the tutor comments.
I want you to read the tutors comments and the original paper and then tell me if you think my new paper will pass.
The passmark is 40, I scored 36. I want to score as close to 50 as I can.