DIRECTIONS: Write approximately one page in which you:
Develop an introduction paragraph that attracts the reader’s attention and introduces the narrow topic of skills you hope to learn or improve upon in college.
Include, as the final sentence in the introduction, the revised version of the thesis statement you wrote in Touchstone 1.1, making sure to use the evaluator’s feedback in your revision.
Develop a conclusion paragraph to the essay, making sure the conclusion signals an end to the essay and provides closing thoughts. Be sure to restate your thesis in different words within this closing paragraph.
Meet the assignment length requirement of five to seven (5-7) sentences for each paragraph.
Minimize mechanical and stylistic errors.
Thesis statement: In my own case, am starting my college adventure in hopes of learning more about running a business, collaborating with people, and communication skills to run my business.
Revised Thesis: I am looking forward to learning more about running my own business, collaborating with others, and enhancing my communication skills as I embark on my college journey.
