The Chicago City Council should implement a coordinated approach to provision of services such as housing to prevent homeless residents from experiencing the harsh consequences including addiction, low self-esteem, and poverty to lower crimes in the city

This instructor is beyond picky. I had to submit a paper on this subject already and she sent it back 8 times and that was after the writing center told me it was fine twice. Now I have to do a PowerPoint on the same topic. Please let me know if you have any questions. I attached all the instructions and examples and I attached my paper that was finally accepted in hopes that the sources I have already used, you can use.