have clear concise language making my point clear with specific evidence and evaluation.
have a clear flow of argument linking to the question. my 3 factors are: acceptance of autocracy, role of elites and nationalism as the reasons Hitler assumed power. I have further broken it down into 3 periods – 1848-71, 1871-1918 and 1918-1934.
my writing is not as clear and concise and sometimes goes into description, please be very evaluative and to the point.
