A good start, Nathaniel. I believe informational posters which communicate are your connection between the visual arts and evangelism. Then see notes on your project, as this component of your essay is not clear.
Please see further comments below for clarification and revision. This is your opportunity to develop a plan to improve upon that which you have already accomplished! It is my hope these notes will lead you in that direction, if you choose to implement them. Your essay revisions Stage E will then be your demonstration of your knowledge and what you have learned through this process.
Comments specific to your essay:
There are three levels of in-text citations, and you are at level 3 and have done an good job with this.
1. Definitions (used to explain yet do not count toward academic support)
2. Academic support, pulling information from your source which helps to expound or support a topic or component of your essay-
3. When providing research for a topic it is good to look deeper into a topic, and an academic journal or book from the library usually achieves this- consider using the library databases for an article on this topic rather than only the encyclopedia…. Here are three points to help simplify using databases 1.start with abstract 2. Read up to methods section 3. Finish with “findings and further research”
~After revisions then clarify your conclusion. The conclusion should summarize without excessively repeating or introducing any new information. A good rule of thumb is to summarize each paragraph with a sentence and place within the conclusion paragraph- as it directly relates to the thesis statement.
`Always have your name in the document title and within the document itself Nathaniel.
