In the attachment, I provide two visions of the research proposal and received two suggestions from each. Research proposal 1 is related to suggestion 1, the research proposal 2 is related to suggestion 2. So, please use the suggestions to improve the research proposal. To be clear, the two research proposals are based on the same topic. Please read the suggestions carefully and make editing and changes to research proposal 1. Feel free to change and delete the sources but when you use a new resource, please make sure it is peer-reviewed articles or books, do not use the website as resources
