Hello,
I was able to speak with my teacher and she expressed that it looks good but she stated that it needs to not be so broad and a little more personal reflection of something I have experienced to better the detail of the paper. Could you please make changes where it is a little less broad and has some data statistics only one or two and it to be used to define why this is impactful? I will attach the paper and the Rubric. PLEASE make sure it is APA and written well! Thank you for everything! Also, if you need personal information to make it better send me a message and I will respond.
