Write an essay on the Start up in Vietnam.
I highlighted in yellow what should be changed and/or revised.
This forst proposal ws not approved and now i was asked to follow in the proposal the guidelines as per document # 2 I attach as well. Basically you need to follow the tutor guidelines in writing and developing the proposal.
I attach also the draft of the dissertation ( document # 3) so it will be easy for you to follow the topics.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Thank you