Ensure you are: 1) Fully explaining Air Pollution, make sure you are including an examples. One way to do this is to use an area of the world where air pollution is the worst, and perhaps where it is the best. Add a source for something like this along with all ‘the facts’ you bring to your writing (what air pollution actually is made of, what it does, where it is found the most, and least). Double check you are FULLY explaining what an EV is, then FULLY explain what a ICEV is and how ICEVs are responsible for most of our air pollution through vehicle emissions and processing the CRUDE OIL to petrol. THIS IS THE BASIS OF YOUR ENTIRE ESSAY! You are analysing EVs to see if they are solving the problem of air pollution. 2) Double Check all your in-text citations. A) Check that you have not quoted anyone’s words. Instead, ensure you are using the (source: NY TImes, 2021) right after you use information from your source. B) Or, introduce the source, “According to the NY TImes article, “How to Use Capital Letters to Start a Sentence,” …. C) Introduce your website by using the correct name of the website. Example, According to Bob’s Bargain Barn, a website explaining how many bargain EVs are now on the market….. Do not use: BBBargain, says hooray you can get a used EV. 3) Check that you are saying vehicle, not car. 4) Check that you are introducing Electric Vehicle (EV) then use EV from then on 5) Check that you are introducing Internal Combustion Engine Vehicle (ICE, or ICEV) then use ICE or ICEV (pick one) from then on 6) Check your sentences are grammatically correct. Have you added periods at the end of your thoughts? Have you used a capital letter to start a sentence?
