– Remove “researcher” from text
– Past tense, no present tense
– 2nd Paragraph in Section 3 add sentence to introduce the Appendix Tables
– Remove “Findings” heading, including the that text with “Results”
– Prepare Conclusion for Data Analysis
– Beef up narrative
– Refer to each research question with additional narrative
– Remove ( ) around #s
– Appendix: Data tables need to be separated so that no table is longer than 1 page each
– APA all Tables
– APA on entire section
