Omit: The beginning, impact, and development of agriculture in the history of humanity will be announced and how it became the key to the civilization of humanity and the sedentary lifestyle, in addition to explaining in detail, the processes and techniques that were created to be able to adapt and survive to the natural factors. You have not answered the questions. How did agriculture originate? – The mutation of einkorn wheat How did it change society? – from nomadic hunters to permanent settled communities, Body 1: You need a topic sentence to open this paragraph. Before agriculture, humans were nomadic hunters. Where are the quotes to support your claims about humans in the stone age? Quote from the film Mankind. Body 2: This paragraph opens with a good topic sentence, but you don’t explain how exactly agriculture originated. This should be the cause paragraph explaining the mutation of einkorn wheat, the accidental discovery of crops by our “farming mother” all supported with quotes from the films Mankind and Gobekli Tepe: The Domestication of Wheat Most of what you have in this paragraph relates to the effects of agriculture which should really be in body paragraph 3. Body 3 What you have in this paragraph should be combined with what you wrote in body 2. Add architecture too and mention Gobekli Tepe. These are the effects. Where are the quotes?
