I copied and pasted the notes my professor left that will help to improve my paper. All the information needed to complete the assignment is in the paper. See below.
Review sample paper for APA formatting of headings and references (capitalization, italicizing, etc.) -1 point
Only 1 paragraph needed for introduction. Include hypothesis at end of literature review
It looks like you repeat much information throughout the method section. For example, you mention the race breakdown 3 times in the participant section. Please condense. The same is true for the measures – include a concise discussion of each measure once.
Include an example item for the Rosenberg self-esteem scale -1 point
Cite Rosenberg self-esteem scale the first time it is introduced. If you are going to mention its reliability, you must give a citation of where you got the information.
Review the methods outline and sample paper for what to include in the procedure section. There should be no results in the method section of your paper. There should be no tables. -1 point
