larify your thesis: what do you want others to know, understand, or feel about Lil Baby’s development?

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While I appreciate your work on Project 2, it falls just a bit short of completion standards and will need to be revised. Mainly, the issue is you do not have a clear thesis in Part 2 and so it falls short of being a coherent argument, supported by both sources. These are the main things to work on improving. Here’s my advice on how to begin:
Clarify your thesis: what do you want others to know, understand, or feel about Lil Baby’s development?
Then, write out three points in support of this, thinking about how each of your sources supports your thinking.
Be sure to reference all of your sources at least once; you do this in one paragraph, but do not provide any paraphrases or quotes from either source so it is not clear how they actually back up your thinking about Lil Baby. As we went over in class, structure your paragraph so that each one has a topic sentence, explanation of the main idea, supporting evidence, interpretation of that evidence, and then a concluding sentence.
Please see inline comments for more on these ideas.

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