Hello, you worked on my discussion section a few days ago. My professor added revisions for this section and she also sent revisions for the results section as well. I have added the revision comments below for each section. I have also attached the whole paper, with all of the sections for you to better understand. Since the abstract and Introduction portion intertwine with the whole project and discussion section please make the corrections in all sections to be consistent. Please let me know if you have any questions, thank you very much.
Results Section Professor Revision Needed
What about any data manipulation? For example, scaling, recoding, averaging of variables?). Please review the above and make these edits and/or additions to the results section.
Discussion Section Professor Revision Needed
The Results and Discussion sections should match up in that you want all of the findings from the Results section summarized in the Discussion section. I think as it stands now, it looks very good re: links to prior research, limitations. Be sure to find a way to wind down the paper with a restatement of your topic and final thoughts on the topic as a whole.
