The writer includes research and attributes that information to an authority.
Because it is a direct quotation, it is in quotation marks.
Because this is an exam, there is no in-text parenthetical citation after the quotation.
Essays will be evaluated according to how effectively they meet the following criteria:
Introduction
Engage Aim to put a face on the issue your claim addresses.
InformIndicate the context, scope and gravity of the issue.
FrameDefine key terms and current policy if necessary.
ClaimExpress a clear, concise policy claim in the last sentence.
Body Paragraphs
AcknowledgeAcknowledge an opposing view expressed by an authority.
ConcedeConcede the merit (s) of that view.
PersuadeProvide a counter argument expressed by an authority.
ElaborateProvide additional support for that counter argument.
Conclusion
Motivate Indicate what is at stake in taking or not taking action on this issue.
Express a clear call to action. Motivate and enable readers to act on that call to action.