Provide feedback, I will be looking for two main things:
1) That you have taken into consideration my feedback and suggestions from your first attempt at this (I expect your thesis to change, or at least show that you’ve improved it when applicable). This includes expansion, development, new ideas, questions, etc.
2) That you have developed your argument, incorporating the new perspectives and information you encountered in your research process. I want to see additional stuff—not only revision, but new writing and thinking. Nothing has to be settled—there will likely be lots of further suggestions. However, the more you provide now the more we can work together to get your project into the best shape we can.
Additionally, I will expect you to include further questions for me on areas you’re struggling with or clarification you need as you complete this project.
