Teacher Comments on previous essay: Dear Emir, Your revision is heading in a promising direction. It includes much more analysis of the painting. See, however, my comments on your claim that the white woman is in control of the dynamic. I think the opposite could be argued. In terms of your research: locate scholarly secondary sources on Homer and Reconstruction, for example. Many of your sources are tertiary sources (see my comment reviewing that term) and others (4) come from the assignment sheet itself and are not yet specific enough to your piece. If you need any help with the above, please do make an appointment for my office hours. Grade earned: B/B- Grade received (due to lateness): D With all best, Prof. Elder
Instructions for the paper is attached below as Writing Assignment 3, my previous paper is attached as well.
