Please write according to the teacher’s feedback
Please complete the final paper according to my “proposal abstract” document, please use the “Five Architects” essay by Rowe as the sorce. Please write mainly about the topics of Getty center and designer Richard Meier and the relationship with modernism.
feedback
Good – I appreciate that you’re engaging with the course material. I see that you are establishing the Getty as part of the 2nd wave of modernism, but I want you to stake a claim that contributes to that discourse. Based on your source notes, it’s as if you’re saying that despite the strict adherence to modern language (or as you call simplicity), the effects of the materiality suggest it is far more complex. And as part of your analysis, I want you to remain objective. What do you mean by harmony? (coherence of materials/color scheme? Its relation to the site?) What do you mean by energy? Use descriiptors that can be objectively analyzed and points to specific elements of the building itself. And you need a title. That will help guide you.
