PART 1: Rewrite the following statement below. Briefly explain what you changed in the rewrite to make it a better thesis statement. So, if there isn’t an argument, then make one up for the statement. These are all Crash (Movie) thesis statements.
1. Officer Ryan is the perfect example of how the police force today is corrupt and how the stereotypical hero is not really the hero because allows his personal feelings to obstruct true justice.
PART 2: In the second part, write your current working thesis statement for your research paper. This can be a rough early draft.
Research question: Over the years, Rap and Hip-hop music and culture have helped give a voice to disadvantaged populations. So how can Rap and Hip-hop give a voice to influence climate change and social sustainability? Search Terms: Rap/Hip-Hop music, Climate Change, Culture, Sustainable Environment, Social Change, Empowerment, Philanthropy, Community.
